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25 February 2008 @ 11:54 pm
Yet another one (Drabble #15)  

Yes, it's here! Also, my computer has a problem today.

Title: Silent Exultation
Pairing: Albus/Gellert
Prompt: "Rain, ruby, pearl" for aurora_knight.
Summary: A rainy summer day out of sight.
Notes: I hope like mad this doesn't come off as too melodramatic.
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter universe belongs to JKR. What am I to that but free entertainment?

The rain pelting down is the most exhilarating sensation Albus has ever experienced – but that may have something to do with his lips gliding along Gellert’s neck. The two of them have taken refuge behind a bush, also dripping wet, shielding them from view as they cling hotly to each other. The kiss that comes later is sloppy but wonderful, and when Albus pulls away, he feels the warmth of the other’s breath on his face, laboured little gasps passing between lips gleaming like polished ruby. And Gellert draws him closer.

They vanish together in a shroud of pearl-coloured mist.

 
 
Current Mood: tiredtired
Current Music: 'Glacial Love' - Siam Shade
 
 
 
Melmo: coastermustntgetmy on February 26th, 2008 02:29 am (UTC)
The kiss that comes later is sloppy but wonderful, and when Albus pulls away, he feels the warmth of the other’s breath on his face, laboured little gasps passing between lips gleaming like polished ruby.

Dude, you better be planning to take the jump into full-on smut soon, because at this point, you're just teasing.

Lovely, lovely fic by the way. Almost makes me want it to rain. (Almost, weather gods!)
See you later, instigator: Y Tu Mamá También (by hyelle_narmo)oudeteron on February 26th, 2008 05:49 pm (UTC)
Mwahaha! I know, I had better write something smutty soon to make up for all this shameless innuendo. (If a "true blue drabble" could have 200 words instead of 100, maybe I could have tried... XD)

Thanks a lot. I hope it doesn't make it rain on you!
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rising_lark: grindeldorerising_lark on February 26th, 2008 08:33 am (UTC)
Wow, you just made my morning! XD <3
See you later, instigator: Remus/Sirius2 (the_8th_square & teh_indyoudeteron on February 26th, 2008 05:49 pm (UTC)
Yay! Post at midnight, make someone's morning. ^_^
Well, I mean to say, what?: Stephen Hotseilf_emit on February 26th, 2008 11:55 am (UTC)
Whee! This is delicious!

I completely agree with what mustntgetmy said, you need to start writing serious pr0n soon, the unresolved sexual tension is slowly killing me!

when Albus pulls away, he feels the warmth of the other’s breath on his face, laboured little gasps passing between lips gleaming like polished ruby. And Gellert draws him closer.
I'm a sucker for subtly rhythmic prose, so I squealed embarrassingly when I read this.

Btw, I actually wanted to read it last night, and I know I was still awake at the time it says you posted it, but for some reason it didn't show up. But after what happened yesterday nothing really surprises me anymore. The internet hates me and I must learn to accept it! XD
See you later, instigator: Bad Education1 (by greeniefru)oudeteron on February 26th, 2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥

And like I told mustntgetmy, yeah, I do need to! The tension is taking its toll on me, too! XD

Whee, I'm glad for that! I like having some kind of rhythm to writing.

Gah, computers strike again. Actually, it took a while after the recorded time before I even got to post this thing. Everything loaded slowly and was driving me insane! As if the computer had something against me posting this drabble. XD
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remecielremeciel on February 26th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
Mm, sloppy kiss. This is indeed really intense and really, really hot. The kiss is wonderfully described. :)
See you later, instigator: Albus/Gellert (by ushitora_icons)oudeteron on February 26th, 2008 08:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I wanted to be straighforward about that kiss, but since it's a drabble, it had to be done just in a few words. Glad you liked it. ^_^
Aurora: humpbackaurora_knight on February 27th, 2008 06:55 am (UTC)
Lovely! I like the idea of these two finding out-of-the-way places to hide with each other - although I can see them being rather careless about it at times. :)

They are both so hot.
See you later, instigator: Y Tu Mamá También (by hyelle_narmo)oudeteron on February 27th, 2008 02:22 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it! Much as I like the idea of them being careless to the point of hazard (sure, they could make the Muggles forget everything, but what about fellow wizards?), having them find nice hidden places is fun too.

Yes, they are. XD
scarlet_chan: Miyaviscarlet_chan on February 28th, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
You are so good at imagry. I loved the drabble. ^_^
See you later, instigator: YoshikiLoveoudeteron on February 28th, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Imagery is one of my favourite things ever. ^_^
lefaym on February 29th, 2008 07:49 pm (UTC)
Mmmm, rain!sex.

There is something very sensual about rain, isn't there?
See you later, instigator: Remus/Sirius2 (the_8th_square & teh_indyoudeteron on February 29th, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
Unless we both just have a rain fetish, there really is something about rain that makes it such an appropriate setting for these scenes. Especially the warm summer rain... ^_^
prelude07 on May 4th, 2008 09:28 pm (UTC)
Melodramatic? Not at all!

Beautiful and poetic as always. But there's also something sweet about this. The image of the rain and mist creates the perfect atmosphere as well. I love kisses in the rain!
See you later, instigator: Toshioudeteron on May 6th, 2008 09:33 pm (UTC)
Hehe, good thing. xD

I'm really pleased to hear that from you since it's just the effect I was trying to get across. (And I love rainy imagery!) Besides, poor Albus and Gellert need to get some undisturbed fun against all the sadness that comes into the relationship later on!