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22 September 2007 @ 10:40 pm
Drabble...what was the count again, #7?  

Just a little something I promised remeciel a good while ago for inspiration. Hope it manages to cheer you up! ^_^

Title: Last
Pairing: Remus/Sirius, as requested.
Era: Marauders
Rating: Completely and utterly harmless.
Summary: Sirius and the sunny Autumn days.
Warning: Um...I've taken liberties with weather. I think it should be correct based on my general knowledge, but I've still never been to Hogwarts. Oh, the shame. XD
Disclaimer: Totally not mine. Totally money-free.


Sirius loves the sun in Autumn. On clear days, his lessons are spent gazing out the classroom’s windows in admiration of the blazing sky, underlined by treetops of the Forbidden Forest in the distance. Whenever he ventures outside with the others, he steals glances at the lake with all the leaves adorning the water’s surface, glittering like gems in the dreamy afternoon. Until night descends upon the scenery as though to remind him that his season is destined to fade into rain and morning frost, its brilliance notwithstanding.

Sirius loves Autumn, and Remus makes him believe it will always last.


I just couldn't be any more vague, could I? ^_^;

 
 
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Melmo: some skies...mustntgetmy on September 23rd, 2007 01:44 am (UTC)
Ooh, how lovely and pretty. I had something more to say but the last line obliterated it.
See you later, instigator: Remus/Sirius2 (the_8th_square & teh_indyoudeteron on September 23rd, 2007 03:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Apologies for the last line and its destructive powers. ^_^;
remeciel: po-pomme de la mort qui tue!remeciel on September 23rd, 2007 08:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, how wonderful. I love the description of Sirius's feelings within the colors and landscapes as well. The way you described details are amazing: blurry and precise at the same time. I really like it - and admire it! wonderful drabble.

And LJ has clearly decided to hate your journal since it wasn't posted on my flist at all! good thing you could have said to me you posted it. :))
See you later, instigator: Y Tu Mamá También (by hyelle_narmo)oudeteron on September 23rd, 2007 08:24 pm (UTC)
I'm really glad you like it! It was hard to desribe the scenery well enough in drabble length, but now it seems it has exactly the effect I was hoping for. Thanks again! ^_^

*tries hard not to get angry with LJ* Someone apparently thinks I should send you notifications myself...
remeciel: spike and juliaremeciel on September 24th, 2007 02:45 pm (UTC)
It was indeed a very wonderful drabble. I don't know about you, but when I draw a sketch/drawble, I've always had this feeling that something's amiss. I guess a drabble doesn't work the same way, though.

I've no idea what's going on, but I hope I didn't miss anything else from my flist because LJ is being bitchy again...
See you later, instigator: Remus/Sirius Canon (by snow_blossoms)oudeteron on September 24th, 2007 04:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks again, and I think a drabble can work that way as well. It wasn't the case with this one, but it can happen. (And I love your drawbles anyway!)

Sounds like LJ is having difficulties for a change. /sarcasm
remeciel: Thé vert 2remeciel on September 25th, 2007 02:59 pm (UTC)
Really? this is really interesting. I've always thought a drablle and a drawble can't work the same way... but again, I'm not a writer after all! ;)

LJ? having difficulties? how come? I thought it was perfect! /sarcasm, again.

See you later, instigator: Toshioudeteron on September 25th, 2007 03:41 pm (UTC)
Well, they probably don't really work the same way, but I suppose they must be similar in some things. Like the feeling we may get from them... ; )

Seriously...if the entry I made yesterday isn't on your friends page either, I'll be pissed. *stabs LJ with basilisk fang (Riddle would be so "happy")*
remeciel: good omensremeciel on September 25th, 2007 03:48 pm (UTC)
Good point! now I can udnerstand how you would feel while writing a drabble. :)

Er, what? you wrote something else yesterday?! I can't have missed two of yout LJ entries. There's a serious problem now!
(can you give me the link, please? I'm going to find it meanwhile clicking on your username, no one knows.)
See you later, instigator: CuteYoshioudeteron on September 25th, 2007 04:04 pm (UTC)
Whee, and I can have insight into the artist's mind! ; )

LJ and technology apparently hate each other. But it's good that you can find the new entry by just viewing my journal...still, it's pretty annoying.
remeciel: lighthouseremeciel on September 26th, 2007 03:09 pm (UTC)
Yes, now all what you have to do is to start drawing yourself. ;)

Very true... I hope I didn't miss anything else important, though! :/
See you later, instigatoroudeteron on September 26th, 2007 05:57 pm (UTC)
And then you can start writing and we're even. XD

I can keep telling you about my own updates, but as for other people's journals...LJ sucks.
remeciel: Lune et balancoireremeciel on September 27th, 2007 08:53 am (UTC)
I wish I could write, but I'm not really used to it. I did take a challenge a while ago with someone on my flist who will draw me something... and in exchange, I will be writing her a poem or a drabble. But I'm utterly afraid of the final result!

It seems it was a temporary thing, but still, I almost missed two of your posts - and one was especially posted for me. *wails*

See you later, instigator: Remus/Sirius2 (the_8th_square & teh_indyoudeteron on September 27th, 2007 10:43 am (UTC)
Aww, do you want some help with it? It would be really difficult for me to draw anything good, so I can imagine writing may be hard for you as well...

I was a bit puzzled why you hadn't replied to that drabble at first! But I did think there was something wrong. "Surprisingly", it turned out to be LJ. XD
remeciel: idiot in loveremeciel on September 28th, 2007 06:11 am (UTC)
Oh, that would be lovely! I have a prompt and the R/S pairing to deal with; here's the prompt: "something involving cake!".

Usually, when there's a fic I want to read, I don't take time to read it at once: I wait for the week-end and then I leave a comment. So if you don't see me commenting maybe it wouldn't be LJ's fault for once, but I being lazy. *gg*
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